The Colosseum in Rome, Italy, was built in 70-80 AD. It was originally called the Flavian Amphitheater. It is the largest ever built in the Roman Empire. It is considered one of the greatest works of Roman architecture and Roman engineering. It was capable of seating 50,000 spectators and was used for gladiatorial contests and other public activities. Today the Colosseum is used as one of Italy’s main tourist attractions, receiving millions of visitors every year. I think the Colosseum should be preserved because it has major cultural and historical relevance and significance on the world. It is a huge asset to humanity and the world. It shows that we as humans do have a history and history is a thing that needs to be preserved for future generations and for ourselves. The Colosseum serves as a type of portal between the present and the past where people are able to go and see for themselves exactly what it is and what it meant. Preserving the Roman Colosseum would mean that for generations to come people will be able to go and witness and learn about the past directly and for themselves, instead of just through a textbook. Preserving the past means paving the way for the future and continuing in our present.
Great place! I can't believe you've been there, that must have been amazing! In this sentence, "I think the Colosseum should be preserved because it has major cultural and historical relevance and significance on the world." it would be more convincing if you took out the "I think." Also, in this sentence, "The Colosseum serves as a type of portal between the present and the past where people are able to go and see for themselves exactly what it is and what it meant." the 3 "and's" make the sentence seem a little wordy. Other than that, great it is a great draft!
ReplyDeletei think its a very interesting place you've picked. i also think that you could talk more about what it means to you and why its so important to you.
ReplyDeleteI love the place you picked! But I think it would be nice if you wrote more about your opinion on the Colosseum and how you felt when you first saw it, stuff like that.
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